Comments on: Take Five, chapter 2

By: Jasona

Jasona — Mon, 22 Mar 2010 21:26:50 +0000

I do like Alice I think she’s awesome! Dose she have a website what’s her real name I’d like to see more of her, does she have a model name she goes by? Anybody know?

By: Sarge395

Sarge395 — Sun, 14 Mar 2010 23:49:19 +0000

I would like to see some of the best power pose photos in HQ format without any text. Just nice big fat raw pics. Fun set here.

By: AZUWSK

AZUWSK — Sat, 13 Mar 2010 20:50:49 +0000

I liked the story, but you have overwritten the first chapter of not so dumb.

By: Norm

Norm — Fri, 12 Mar 2010 01:53:53 +0000

Alice makes a very nice Supergirl and the story was great.

By: homer

homer — Thu, 11 Mar 2010 05:49:13 +0000

alice was good looking in her “power pose”…even in supergirl costume…
let’s try with the other superheroines dress…
(i hope some model with real curves in a new brand more sexy miss power or wonder babe costume…you know what i mean…lol)

By: homer

homer — Thu, 11 Mar 2010 05:34:27 +0000

the crystal idea seems good but…is it really a power snap or does she simulate? cause in the end she gets easily the upper hand against the thug…
i’d like to see miss power too…in a action comic photo story her costume is so…sexy…

By: Scotty2788

Scotty2788 — Thu, 11 Mar 2010 02:20:56 +0000

Jon. Is miss power in her new blue boots or nylons still?

By: Jon

Jon — Thu, 11 Mar 2010 00:34:14 +0000

Hey all. This is a very respectful set of comments

Jose, I agree with Alberto – I didn’t think you were negative/offensive/abrasive, and I really hope my comment above didn’t suggest that.

I just wanted to make sure that all were aware that any shortcomings in the comic were my fault and not Argonaut’s.

So, onto the finer points of Alice – she’s a great Supergirl, huh?

As for Miss Power… you’l have to wait until Monday!

Jon

By: Alberto

Alberto — Wed, 10 Mar 2010 23:39:47 +0000

Jose: No need to apologize. Your criticism was constructive in nature, and not negative, offensive, or abrasive.

I enjoyed the latest story, especially seeing Alice as Supergirl, but I am ready for some Miss Power, too.

By: Argonaut

Argonaut — Wed, 10 Mar 2010 03:08:19 +0000

Jose: No apologies are necessary. Your criticisms are fair and thoughtful.

Jon wrote to me a while ago to ask if I had any ideas for short 1 or 2 chapter stories that he could shoot at the end of a day, while the models were still on his dime. “Take Five” was what I came up with. I wanted it to be a little different and off-beat, so I wrote a wordless action sequence framed by the scenes in the studio. The absence of dialogue was meant to create a contrast between the “frame” and the action sequence.

The rock was Jon’s idea, and I think it was a good one. There’s been some conversation on this blog lately regarding the lack of conflict in many of the stories, and Jon wanted to add an element of tension to my script. The rock allowed him to end the first chapter on a cliffhanger that wasn’t in my original story.

So Jon and I tried something a little different. Some readers liked it (thanks, guys!), others not so much (sorry!). Personally, I think Jon did a great job bringing my story to life, so he shouldn’t be giving me all the credit. And one thing we all seem to be agreed on is that Alice is a terrific Supergirl! I hope to see her in another story soon.

Cheers –

Argonaut